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Star Crossed RAW by pjacubinas Star Crossed RAW by pjacubinas
Not totally done here, but i think i got the render and lighting just about right. I'm going to do some post work and re-submit the image in a few days.

But before i get to that, I thought I would as the community what y'all think!

So any comments or questions or suggestions are welcome, wanted and needed!!

Thanks fellow DA's! Love ya!
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:iconnobbe42:
Hi pjacubinas,

first of all - I like the scene and as always in art doing things a certain way is a matter of taste.

1) Scene setup:
You could add more drama and tension to the scene e.g. by letting the guy with the high-tech gun aiming at something or someone inside the ruined building. As a side effect the HUD could me more visible to the viewer (looks great btw.). Of course adding more drama might not be what you had in mind... :)

2) Lighting:
Depending on what you want to emphasis within the scene you could add some more sophisticated light+shadow setup. If your render engine supports PMC or pathtracing you could also create a real world daylight scenario. Thereby you could add a certain mood or atmosphere. E.g. dusk or dawn with interesting shadows. Would also be appropriate if you did intend to create a slightly relaxed atmosphere.

3) Atmosphere:
Some smoke, dust and/or fire?
For my taste a more greyish and darker sky could add to the war scenario. But of course that's again a matter of taste.

4) DOF:
Again depending on what you want to emphasis a slight camera DOF could be added.

5) Level of detail / textures
Great!

6) Render quality
Very good (light setup could be improved).


All in all a great piece of art! Keep up the good work!
:):)
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neanderdigital Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   Digital Artist
Excellent :)
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Tygahman Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What rendering program do U use?
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pjacubinas Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Artist
This was rendered in Daz 4.watever-it-is-now...
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Tygahman Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
COOL :).
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Tygahman Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the vividness and clarity of all the details as well as the p.o.v. . The lighting is pretty good too :).
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dberrbus Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Pretty awesome if you ask me.
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Bad-Dragon Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist

The lighting, composition, and POV are all excellent. I think I would add some clouds of dust, and dirty up the uniform and the tank a bit.

 

 

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AOGRAI Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellente! Dont like her gun though and great lighting!
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pjacubinas Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Artist
what don't you like about the gun?
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AOGRAI Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, no worries, just did not like the design coz of my own preference.  Prefer this one...
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