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Not totally done here, but i think i got the render and lighting just about right. I'm going to do some post work and re-submit the image in a few days.
But before i get to that, I thought I would as the community what y'all think!
So any comments or questions or suggestions are welcome, wanted and needed!!
Thanks fellow DA's! Love ya!
But before i get to that, I thought I would as the community what y'all think!
So any comments or questions or suggestions are welcome, wanted and needed!!
Thanks fellow DA's! Love ya!
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Hi pjacubinas,
first of all - I like the scene and as always in art doing things a certain way is a matter of taste.
1) Scene setup:
You could add more drama and tension to the scene e.g. by letting the guy with the high-tech gun aiming at something or someone inside the ruined building. As a side effect the HUD could me more visible to the viewer (looks great btw.). Of course adding more drama might not be what you had in mind... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
2) Lighting:
Depending on what you want to emphasis within the scene you could add some more sophisticated light+shadow setup. If your render engine supports PMC or pathtracing you could also create a real world daylight scenario. Thereby you could add a certain mood or atmosphere. E.g. dusk or dawn with interesting shadows. Would also be appropriate if you did intend to create a slightly relaxed atmosphere.
3) Atmosphere:
Some smoke, dust and/or fire?
For my taste a more greyish and darker sky could add to the war scenario. But of course that's again a matter of taste.
4) DOF:
Again depending on what you want to emphasis a slight camera DOF could be added.
5) Level of detail / textures
Great!
6) Render quality
Very good (light setup could be improved).
All in all a great piece of art! Keep up the good work!
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>